After showing a teacher our first edit she gave us some feedback and her opinion of what needed to be changed our added to it in order to improve our final grade. She said she thought it was slightly boring, which both me and karim agree with, and that we need to be a lot more abstract and break the rules of conventional folk. The video needs to be more upbeat and faster to make it less boring but she did like the use of the owl mask, so in order to make it more abstract we are going to add more features like that in to our video. We have taken her advice on board and we will do our best to make our the video the absolute best it can be.
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